Good synth at the beginning. I like as the snare joins too, but as Tarian said it's too much kickdrum I would change it a little. I have doubts about the piano. I think it doesn't perfectly fit into the song, you should try with another instrument maybe with a 8 bit too or without it? I don't know. I like the way you mixed the choir and the violin with 8 bit, so you should create more songs like this. Great concept.